I had a blast watching The Fifth Element! In fact, I’ve rewatched it countless times over the years. It’s one of the most iconic sci-fi films of 1997. It was so popular that they even tried to make a video game based on it, but unfortunately, the graphics at the time couldn’t do it justice. That said, the movie itself was incredible. With today’s advanced graphics and technology, a remake for Xbox or PS5 could be absolutely mind-blowing.
As a writer, I’ve always been fascinated by the story and characters of The Fifth Element. I’ve even toyed with the idea of rewriting the script with a different scenario, while still keeping the core elements of the original story and characters. I think it would be a fun challenge to explore new possibilities within this beloved universe.
Without further ado , here’s a sneak preview :
Scene 1: A Cab Ride in Paris
EXT. PARIS STREET – EVENING
A futuristic Paris, a sprawling metropolis of towering skyscrapers and traffic full of flying cars. The city is bathed in neon lights, creating a vibrant and chaotic atmosphere.
INT. FLYING CAB – EVENING
KORBEN DALLAS, a middle-aged taxi driver, is piloting his flying cab through the city, his face etched with worry.
KORBEN (To himself) Another crazy night in Paris.
A young woman, LEELOO, crashes through the sunroof of the cab, landing in the passenger seat. Her eyes are wide with panic.
LEELOO (Panting) Take me to Cornelius!
KORBEN (Surprised) Cornelius? The sacred priest?
LEELOO (Insisting) Yes, him! He’s the only one who can help me.
Leeloo’s appearance is striking. She has bright orange hair, unusual markings on her body, and wears a strange, revealing outfit.
KORBEN (Hesitant) Alright, but it’s going to cost you.
Korben turns on the meter and speeds off, weaving through the air traffic.
LEELOO (Looking out the window, her eyes filled with wonder) This is beautiful.
KORBEN (Chuckling) Wait til you see the Eiffel Tower !
Scene 2 : A Flying Car Chase in Paris
EXT. PARIS STREET – EVENING
Korben’s flying cab weaves through the city, narrowly avoiding obstacles and other vehicles. A police flying car is in hot pursuit.
POLICE OFFICER (Over the intercom) Stop! Police!
Korben ignores the warning and accelerates, the flying police car closing in.
KORBEN (To Leeloo) Hold on!
Korben performs a daring maneuver, swerving between two skyscrapers. The flying police car is unable to follow.
LEELOO (Screaming) You’re crazy!
KORBEN (Grinning) Welcome to Paris.
Scene 3: Cornelius’ Apartment
INT. CORNELIUS’ APARTMENT – NIGHT
A luxurious, high-rise apartment with panoramic views of Paris. CORNELIUS, a well-dressed, elderly man, is sitting on a couch, reading a book.
KORBEN (Out of breath) Cornelius! We found you!
Cornelius looks up, his expression bored.
CORNELIUS (Yawning) Is there something I can help you with?
KORBEN (Ignoring the question) We have Leeloo!
Cornelius’ eyes widen in surprise.
CORNELIUS (Quickly) Shhh! Don’t say her name.
Korben helps Leeloo out of the cab and carries her into the apartment.
KORBEN (Concerned) Is she okay?
CORNELIUS (Examining Leeloo) She’s exhausted. We need to get her to bed.
Cornelius leads Korben and Leeloo to a bedroom.
KORBEN (As he lays Leeloo down) What’s wrong with her?
CORNELIUS (Whispering) She’s a Diva. A sacred being.
Cornelius closes the door, making sure it’s locked.
KORBEN (Confused) A Diva? What does that mean?
CORNELIUS (Intrigued) It means she’s the key to saving the universe.
Scene 4: The Black Hole
EXT. SPACE – DAY
A massive black hole looms in the distance, its gravitational pull warping the surrounding space-time. A fleet of space military ships approaches, their engines humming.
INT. SPACE MILITARY SHIP – DAY
COMMANDER, a stern-faced military officer, is monitoring the situation on a screen.
COMMANDER (To his crew) We’re closing in. Prepare to engage.
On another ship, the UNITED WORLD PRESIDENT, a wise and experienced leader, is listening in.
UNITED PRESIDENT (Concerned) Report.
COMMANDER (Over the comms) We’re nearing the black hole, sir. It appears to be emitting a strange energy.
On the screen, a fiery core is visible within the black hole.
COMMANDER (Continued) It’s almost as if it’s feeding on the star system.
UNITED PRESIDENT (Gravely) We must stop it.
COMMANDER (Hesitating) Sir, this is a dangerous mission. The black hole’s gravitational pull is immense.
UNITED PRESIDENT (Determined) Proceed. The fate of the universe may depend on it.
The commander nods, his eyes filled with resolve.
COMMANDER (To his crew) Arm weapons. Target the black hole’s core.
Scene 5: The Confrontation
EXT. SPACE – DAY
The space military ships fire their weapons at the black hole, but the energy blasts are absorbed by the black hole’s gravitational field. The ships are being pulled closer and closer to the event horizon.
INT. SPACE MILITARY SHIP – DAY
The commander watches the ships being pulled into the black hole with horror.
COMMANDER (To his crew) Abandon ship! Evacuate immediately!
The crew rushes to the escape pods, but it’s too late. The ship is swallowed by the black hole, leaving behind a trail of distorted light.
EXT. SPACE – DAY
The United President watches the scene unfold on his screen, his face filled with despair.
UNITED PRESIDENT (To himself) Is there nothing we can do?
INT. SPACE MILITARY SHIP – DAY
The crew fires their weapons at the black hole, but the energy blasts are absorbed by the black hole’s gravitational field. The ships are being pulled closer and closer to the event horizon.
COMMANDER (into comms) Fire everything!
The crew continues to fire, but their weapons are ineffective.
UNITED PRESIDENT (on screen) Retreat! Evacuate immediately!
The commander nods sadly.
COMMANDER (to crew) Abandon ship!
The crew rushes to the escape pods, but it’s too late. The ship is swallowed by the black hole, leaving behind a trail of distorted light.
EXT. SPACE – DAY
The United President watches the scene unfold on his screen, his face filled with despair.
UNITED PRESIDENT (to himself) No…
Scene 6: Korben’s Apartment
INT. KORBEN’S APARTMENT – DAY
KORBEN DALLAS, a rugged, former Special Forces soldier, is sitting on his couch, watching TV. His tiny, modular apartment is sparsely furnished.
SOUND of a phone ringing
Korben answers his phone.
KORBEN Hello?
MOTHER (O.S.) Korben, is that you?
KORBEN Mom? What’s up?
MOTHER (O.S.) I heard you won the Gemini Croquette Contest!
KORBEN (Confused) What? I didn’t enter any contest.
MOTHER (O.S.) Well, someone must have entered in your name. They said you’re going to Fhloston Paradise!
KORBEN (Exasperated) Mom, I’m not going anywhere. I’m too busy.
MOTHER (O.S.) Oh, come on, Korben. It’s a vacation. You deserve it.
Korben sighs.
KORBEN Fine. But I’m not paying for it.
MOTHER (O.S.) Don’t worry, honey. I got you two tickets. All-inclusive.
Korben hangs up the phone, looking both annoyed and intrigued.
Scene 7: The Delivery
INT. KORBEN’S APARTMENT – LATER
Korben is unpacking his suitcase, filled with tropical clothing and beach gear. A knock at the door startles him.
KORBEN Who’s there?
The door opens to reveal a mysterious, hooded figure.
HOODED FIGURE (In a deep, synthesized voice) The package is for you.
The figure hands Korben a small, metallic box.
KORBEN What’s this?
HOODED FIGURE (Without hesitation) I’m just the delivery guy. How the hell would I know ?
The hooded figure disappears as quickly as it appeared.
INT. KORBEN’S APARTMENT – LATER
KORBEN stares at the box, his curiosity piqued. He slowly opens it. Inside, nestled in a bed of velvet, is a mysterious, ancient object shaped like a key.
KORBEN (His voice filled with wonder and confusion) What the hell is this?
Scene 8: The Unexpected Visitors
INT. KORBEN’S APARTMENT – LATER
KORBEN stands by the door, peering through the peephole. He sees LEELOO, the fiery-haired alien woman he met earlier, standing on his doorstep.
KORBEN (Surprised) Leeloo?
He quickly opens the door, smiling.
KORBEN (Continued) It’s good to see you again.
As Korben steps aside to let Leeloo in, he notices a priest, CORNELIUS, standing behind her.
KORBEN (Confused) What’s going on?
LEELOO (Smiling) We need your help, Korben.
CORNELIUS (In a solemn tone) The fate of the universe depends on it.
KORBEN (Suspiciously) What do you mean?
CORNELIUS (Explaining) The Stones are in Fhloston Paradise. We must retrieve them before it’s too late.
KORBEN (Angry) So, that’s why you were hiding behind Leeloo? You deceived me!
LEELOO (Apologizing) I’m sorry, Korben. But it was necessary.
CORNELIUS (Persuasively) Please, Korben. Give us the tickets. It’s for the greater good.
Korben hesitates, torn between his anger and his desire to help.
KORBEN (Reluctantly) Fine. But if this is a trick, I’ll find you.
[ The last Scene 9 is shown in authentic Screenplay Format ; just to give you an idea ]
** Scene 9 is a pivotal turning point in the narrative, where the plot reaches its climax and the characters’ fates are irrevocably altered. There’s no turning back…
Scene 9: The Failed Attempt
**INT. SECURITY OFFICE – DAY**
*CORNELIUS, disguised as Korben, stands before the security officer, trying to convince him that he is the winner of the Gemini Croquette Contest.*
**CORNELIUS**
(Nervous)
I’m Korben Dallas. The winner.
**SECURITY OFFICER**
(Examining Cornelius closely)
I’m sorry, sir. But your facial features don’t match the records.
**CORNELIUS**
(Panicking)
It’s just a tan!
**SECURITY OFFICER**
(Shakes his head)
I’m afraid that won’t do.
*The security officer calls for guards.*
**SECURITY OFFICER**
(Continued)
Arrest this man. He’s an imposter.
*Guards rush into the room and apprehend Cornelius.*
**KORBEN**
(Bursting into the room, out of breath)
He’s an imposter! I’m Korben!
*The guards hesitate, unsure who to believe.*
**LEAD SECURITY GUARD**
(To his subordinates)
Let him go.
*The guards release Cornelius.*
**KORBEN**
(To the security officer)
I’m the real Korben Dallas.
*The security officer checks his records again.*
**SECURITY OFFICER**
(Surprised)
You’re right! I apologize for the misunderstanding.
*The security officer hands Korben and Leeloo VIP passes.*
**KORBEN**
(To Leeloo)
Well, that was a close call.
**LEELOO**
(Smiling)
It seems fate wanted us to be here.
Scene 10: The Journey to Solarius
**EXT. STARSHIP – DAY**
*KORBEN and LEELOO stand on the deck of a sleek starship, gazing out at the vast expanse of space. The ship is traveling at incredible speeds, leaving a trail of light behind it.*
**KORBEN**
(To Leeloo)
Can you believe we’re actually doing this?
**LEELOO**
(Smiling)
It’s incredible.
*The starship enters a wormhole, a swirling vortex of energy. The ship is pulled through the wormhole, emerging in a different solar system.*
**EXT. SOLARIUS – DAY**
*The starship lands on a pristine white beach. The planet SOLARIUS is a tropical paradise, with lush vegetation and crystal-clear waters.*
**KORBEN**
(Amazed)
This place is unbelievable.
**LEELOO**
(Nodding)
It’s like a dream.
*A gigantic cruise ship is docked nearby. Passengers are disembarking, carrying colorful luggage.*
**KORBEN**
(Pointing to the cruise ship)
Looks like that’s where our adventure begins.
*As Korben and Leeloo board the cruise ship, they are unaware that CORNELIUS, disguised as a crew member, is also on board.*
**CORNELIUS**
(To himself)
I won’t let them get their hands on the Stones.
In my altered screenplay, Cornelius has become the antagonist. His desire for power and glory has led him down a dark path.
What do you think of my take on The Fifth Element? Have you seen the original film? I’d love to hear your thoughts. Please be respectful in your comments.
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